by Abhik Paul
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You hit the hiss beat a little too early
Like the idea and the beats. Hand on chin for non player feels cliche, not needed. You are creative tho. Like it.
Nice touch with the dangling tie, I think it dangles a little too much, though. I feel like it should probably be a little more relaxed in some spots, and more dramatically flappy at the end.
Character movements are great. Pool table environment could be improved.
Remember to turn off the HUD when you playblast your animations
This is amazing! Great movement, interesting camera angles, expressive characters. Kudos. Perhaps if I were to suggest anything, maybe have the first character focus more on his shot when playing pool. Overall kudos
Animator: Abhik Paul
Description: Thanks for malcolm rig.....
Experience: 1 yr
Time taken: 12 days after work