The man and the bar tender
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The second cut of your first character movements exaggerates too much. Keeping the hand movements at a minimum makes the performance more credible. Shoot a reference video of yourself and animate a version of that.
Good character development. Unsure of plot.
Animator: Navischwaren Prakash
Description: A confused man wants to know the secrets of the bar tender. Why is the bartender the way he is?
Experience: 3 years as an animation student
Time taken: 1 month