What is her secret?
by Perry Wubben
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Frank O Bear:
Mona Lisa made me smile. Excellent visual story solution.
Your character here seems to be done pretty good, but the picture in his hand needs some proper weight in it. That appears to be a copy of the Mona Lisa printed onto a steel sheet, which would weigh around 25 pounds, so he should be holding it with both hands (he doesn't look like a particularly strong fellow). If its more like a poster, maybe printed onto paper or canvas, it needs some flexy-ness in it, to sway and bend as he moves about with it.
After "Well you must.", his hips should relax a little. Or, do something else, change pose or something. They feel robotic the way they snap into place and freeze there.
love the creativity
Animator: Perry Wubben
Description: A janitor having a mental episode after his shift in a museum.
Experience: A little less than one year
Time taken: 3 days