Final Rating: 5.28. Finished 55 out of 282 entries.

4,441 views including the voting period.


Animator: Perry Wubben

Description: A janitor having a mental episode after his shift in a museum.

Experience: A little less than one year

Time taken: 3 days


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Frank O Bear:

Mona Lisa made me smile. Excellent visual story solution.

Carl Slate:

Your character here seems to be done pretty good, but the picture in his hand needs some proper weight in it. That appears to be a copy of the Mona Lisa printed onto a steel sheet, which would weigh around 25 pounds, so he should be holding it with both hands (he doesn't look like a particularly strong fellow). If its more like a poster, maybe printed onto paper or canvas, it needs some flexy-ness in it, to sway and bend as he moves about with it.
After "Well you must.", his hips should relax a little. Or, do something else, change pose or something. They feel robotic the way they snap into place and freeze there.

Steen Olson:

love the creativity