Final Rating: 4.85. Finished 76 out of 282 entries.

9,376 views including the voting period.


Animator: Shen Yuxiao

Description: two men sit in the restaurant and talk.

Experience: still a student in third year of university

Time taken: one month


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Mike M.:

You focused on the movement of the primary character, but you ignored the secondary character. Very few people sits in a booth/table in a diner with their hands on their lap. Have him hold something - maybe hiding behind a menu - peeking over it when he gives his lines or have him fidgeting or tap the table - make him act like he's hiding something (nervous). Visit a diner and see how people act. Subtly is the key to a good performance.