The Winner's Secret
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Good setup, nice staging, but all the animation moves quickly between poses... not a lot of variety in the timing
The over exaggeration of this animation does not work. Minimize the movement and your animation will be more successful.
Frank O Bear:
Good story idea.
Some movements are over the top, but overall they feel very organic
Ha Ha cool animation idea!
They really don't need to move their heads that much, a little subtlety goes a long way. Save the big movements for where you want the audiences attention. Framing on must is odd your losing the brown horse way over on screen right.
I feel like the neck movement is too random. Nice work though!
Animator: Sabrina Almeida
Description: A horse questions how his suspiciously fast neighbor continually beats him in race after race.
Experience: two years
Time taken: The entire month of April