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Entertaining, intricate acting. Satisfying shot choices. There are no big mistakes. The critiques that I have are small, but this is what I got:
The way the blue shirt character imitates playing with a controller at the end doesn't feel natural. He also uncrosses his right leg at the exact same time he leans forward; it doesn't feel natural either (it would help to offset the timing a bit). The green shirt's hand movements are repetitive and a bit unfinished. The background could have been set in a house, or with a wall and furniture.
For the most part, it's awesome. There aren't many fundamental mistakes to pick at here.
Good work, good staging..Keep it up
Nice expressive characters.
Your lip sync is off. a bit; the mouth shapes do not fit the sounds emitting Tweak that, and you will have a solid clip.
Crisp and to the point - Just awesome
Animator: Varun Boomboi
Description: Younger Brother Unable To Understand How His Older Brother Takes Life So Easy
Time taken: 14 Hours