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Secrets of the office

by Tristan A

Final Rating: 4.13. Finished 137 out of 282 entries.

248 views including the voting period.


Animator: Tristan A

Description: Mine is a good meh i believe.

Experience: 2-3 years

Time taken: less than a month.


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Carl Slate:

I would suggest not animating your camera except to follow motion (like when people are walking), and for dramatic effect. Like, DRAMATIC dramatic, such as sharp jumps and twists between static moments. The constant motion just makes the camera feel swingy/slippery and weird. The characters look done quite well, I think it's mostly the flying camera that impacts this animation negatively.

Sofia Conciarelli:

I like it, expecially the labial, but the camera moves too much

Ezra Allen:

It's snowing?


Excesive camera movement.