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Layout and Cameras


Final Rating: 2.39. Finished 291 out of 330 entries.

299 views including the voting period.



Description: Worked out acting choices, shot reference and posed with cameras.

Experience: A few years

Time taken: A couple hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Zach Savaglio:

Extremely choppy movements. That's the first thing I'd work on.

Derek Christmann:

nice blocking!

Jordan Smith:

Still in key poses.

Jessica Cain:

I can see this is just unfinished, so it's hard to critique. Using Deadpool for such an expressive role might not work that great unless you REALLY push those emotions. Your camera framing is weird too.