Final Rating: 6.07. Finished 22 out of 330 entries.

724 views including the voting period.


Animator: Lauren Wanner

Description: The grumpy man never took care of his son when he was a kid. Now that is old, his bitter son repay him by leaving him in a retirement home.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 30 hours


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Tom Islava:

Ouch! That was harsh!

Ben Beaumont:

Harsh! But a good animation, good work!

Victor Pierce:

That's one of the more clever storylines I've seen! I also like the first character's reactions to the second one's dialogue. Nice job!

Shiloh Z. Vanaver:

Animation is really nice. Felt the emotions of the characters. The staging and composition could be fixed up a bit, but I predict you get top 11 if not 3rd place. Good job!

cesar ramirez jr:

I really like the face work. I think the younger man's body movement is a bit too constant/ repetitive, like he needs a nice pose to find and hold. The arm on the shoulder of the older man is good, it feels right.