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Ouch! That was harsh!
Harsh! But a good animation, good work!
That's one of the more clever storylines I've seen! I also like the first character's reactions to the second one's dialogue. Nice job!
Shiloh Z. Vanaver:
Animation is really nice. Felt the emotions of the characters. The staging and composition could be fixed up a bit, but I predict you get top 11 if not 3rd place. Good job!
cesar ramirez jr:
I really like the face work. I think the younger man's body movement is a bit too constant/ repetitive, like he needs a nice pose to find and hold. The arm on the shoulder of the older man is good, it feels right.
Animator: Lauren Wanner
Description: The grumpy man never took care of his son when he was a kid. Now that is old, his bitter son repay him by leaving him in a retirement home.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 30 hours