Final Rating: 2.69. Finished 201 out of 218 entries.

414 views including the voting period.


Animator: Adriana Manquero

Description: A love-struck young man tries to save his crush and her brother from their capture. Too bad he is lacking a lot of credibility.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 4 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Benjamin Arzt:

There are too many cuts in here which makes it really hard to follow the action. Imaging cuts being something like blinks. Quick cuts like these are more suited for a fast action scene and less for a rather clam dialogue like this.

Maribel Orozco:

Maybe lose a cut or two from the beginning, its a bit disorienting as it is. One establishing shot with the 3 other characters together should be enough to tell the audience whats going on.

Zachary Checkeye:

Too many cuts!

Imani Jay:

Your cuts are very rapid and startling almost - slow down the pacing a bit camera wise


Too jumpy.

Kyle Newton:

Those camera cuts are jarring. Stop doing that.

Ben Hall:

Need 12 principles of animation here

Aaron McGriff:

Maybe fewer cuts would be more effective.