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prisoners I suppose...

by Alexis Vazquez

Final Rating: 3.81. Finished 133 out of 218 entries.

401 views including the voting period.


Animator: Alexis Vazquez

Description: the kind of prisoners in this video are not what they are supposed to...

Experience: half a year

Time taken: two weeks


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Pamela Rivera:

work more on the animation curves, it feels too linear.

Michaela Dawn:

Don't move the camera so much. It takes away from the animation. Just have it jumpcut from still shot to still shot.


The camera is moving too much

Javid Fathi:

Good work with your character animation, I like the idea of two robots sharing the conflict. Because your characters don't have mouths), make sure that you make the secondary and body action that much clearer [head nods and antenna movement might show the character's focus/thoughts rather than their word phrasing]. Marvin the Martian is a perfect example of this, if you need one. Good work overall. :)

Ben Hall:

Need 12 principles of animation here