Final Rating: 3.74. Finished 138 out of 218 entries.

368 views including the voting period.


Animator: Peter F. Holcomb

Description: This escape has hit a snag.

Experience: 2 years a student

Time taken: One week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Michaela Dawn:

Needs to be smoother. Still very jerky. Try smoothing out keyframes in the graph editor. Emotions should not transition from a-b, but more like a-b-c.


Don't just move the head, it's not natural

Kyle Newton:

The characters are moving stiffly, but there's something weirdly charming about their expressions.

Ben Hall:

Need 12 principles of animation here