Imprison them in Prison
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the acts are really slow, and I feel kind of a robotic feeling on the guy that is suppose to be alive. Specially in the interpolation of the poses... needs more work on the timing and the breakdowns.
Eyes are at the default position. move the eyelids more closer to the pupils for more realism.
Holden Van Houten:
All of the characters have basically the same bored expression. Spruce em up a bit, add some character.
Stiff, but its a nice start
Extremely floaty. Idea is good, good rendering, body language decent. Faces need a lot more emotional expressiveness and fix the floatiness (you let the computer do too much of the in-betweening).
Those eyes and brows are oddly stiff during conversation.
movements could be smoother and poses can be much stronger
Animator: Vincere Amlan
Description: A policeman is having a conversation with another man who is taking two persons, without realizing who they were. After realizing the truth he tells the policeman that he is delivering them to prison.
Time taken: 2 weeks