Final Rating: 2.91. Finished 228 out of 290 entries.

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Description: an advice when you are going to be killed

Experience: 3 months

Time taken: 1 day


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Shaun Bartoo:

Your camera moves are sort of unnecessary and distracting. Your animation still feels like blocking - very pose to pose and static. You need to focus on loosening up your animation with followthrough and overlap in your breakdowns. Some of your acting choices aren't really working either. I dont get a clear intention from his performance.

Imon Branch:

the movement was a little off and the zoom action needs work.