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Small time crook low-down

by Laszlo Lenhardt

Final Rating: 3.60. Finished 178 out of 290 entries.

426 views including the voting period.


Animator: Laszlo Lenhardt

Description: A wanna-be gangster trying to impress nervously.

Experience: A few years.

Time taken: circa 2 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Rachel Wach:

I needed more emotion from the character. Didn't connect at all.

Paul Von:

poses are weak


I think you need to exaggerate the movements a little more. It's kinda like he is being restrained by something.

Michael Kristiansen:

Too static for me compared to the soundclip. Does'nt seem to fit together imo.
But the setup and animation is not bad.

Michael McKnight:

Lip sync and general animation is decent, and I quite like the background used here. Could definitely be more emotive in the body movements.

Nick Barbour:

The character doesn't fit the audio, in terms of emotion and and body language.

Benjamin Arzt:

I expected this character to be more energetic with more body acting, but I gave you a 10 because would work quite well as a subtle "talking head" documentary shot :)

Connor Leuck:

Needs more poses and emotion. There is only one time he blinks.

Imon Branch:

a little more body movement.