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I missed your premise the first watch through because you don't hold on the dead bird nearly long enough for it to read. The secondary character really detracts from the piece I feel. I actually think it would be stronger if it was just the two birds. He''s hardly animated. Theres no performance. He doesn't react at all the the crow's dialogue, and a thought bubble is not a good replacement for acting. The swinging of the secondary character's feel isn't working. It needs more inbetweens, especially padding around the extreme where you see the bottom of his shoes, and a movement that big in his legs needs to affect the rest of his body.
I get no sense of the crow's personality. You're just flipping back and forth between two keyframes. There's no basic animation principles present. I love your illustration style, keep working on your animation.
I like the pokeball
not a lot of movement for the main character. but its good.
Animator: Jojoe Longoria
Description: Jojoe thinks about bird's bad idea.
Experience: not alot i have only done 2d sprites for html games
Time taken: the past Mondays