Final Rating: 2.39. Finished 164 out of 175 entries.

468 views including the voting period.


Animator: tohid razpoush

Description: it's my first animation

Experience: amator

Time taken: 5 day


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Eric Raffle:

too slow your gravity is wrong it looks like they are floating in space your production needs to be more realistic, try acting out your scene in real life on a camera to get better time and movement.

Latif Moxon:

Need a lot of work
Thats great u participate
Work hard and watch rest of apiral competition to recognize animation

Anthony Doueihi:

Idea is good, but the animation needs alot of work

Kristen Adams:

The movements are all a little jerky, especially when the guy gets up. Kind of breaking the laws of physics there...

Joshua Tucker:

The animation isn't very good, its really jumpy, needs a lot of work.