Comments:
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Aaron:
Very well done. The lighting is very good.
Diane Aarts:
don't need camera moves, maybe just cut to last line.
William Sperling:
Remove the camera move... Also try to work on the expression on the mans face.
Animator: Joe Dykstra
Description: A heartbroken woman is consoled by her father in his office. (I apologize for the lighting glitch, I could not find a solution, but felt it was worth keeping the camera and light positioning as they are)
Experience: Novice, about 1 year.
Time taken: One week