Steve Sloan:

I love the expressions and poses, good job

Jacopo Armani:

Todd was great!
Jacobin's energy at times doesn't match dialogue intensity. Probably some secondary accents on his head would have helped.
Great work, highly polished!!!

Ezra Allen:

I think a bit too much action on the pink guy, I would calm it down a bit on the middle section from are you not aware to latte. the animation quality is very high nice work.

Steve Lo:

only comment is the head of the colored guy @ fram 191 seems to pop. maybe extend that pose by 1 or 2 frames. great!!

Jesse Baumgartner:

Really nice work. Nice and snappy animation and good poses.

Taber Dunipace:

Very nice animation and acting choices. The concept is funny too, but again, as many others are doing in this piece, there are too many actions going on for me to follow.

Erik Griott:

i really like how you set this scene up, and its a very nice concept, but i feel that jacobim is doing too much. you have nice secondary action, good acting, except that jacobim is explaining physically everything he is saying.

mark whitcombe:

nice, i like it

Don Dixon:

Great poses on this one and i love the dynamics of the balancing of the trey it realy adds to this one, seems like you had alot of fun with it too!

Dhar:

Excellent story. One of the best interpretations of the clip that I have come across.

Aaron Clement:

Posture is good from Todd... the ending wasn't bad, either... good job.

Tom Cho:

All in all, very good poses but the most important one at the end did not read well (even without liquid coming out it should read).

Tyler Phillips:

Nice job, a lot of acting put into this but it's not that bad.

jacko yeoh:

love the acting altho seem jerky at parts and a little over the top but nice expression and todd's animation is great

Derek Mabson:

One of my favorites for this month. Excellent idea and execution.

yeshwanth:

looks floating in some places...mmm and the servers pose doesnt define the gravity a lot..cheers

Roger Feron:

Nice animation. I don't think you're allowed to edit the sound... unevens the playing field ;-)

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Very nice! I like the style, the poses and the actions. As a little critique I'd say the actions during the "Are you not..." phrase are a little too contained for the audio, although it gives nice contrast with the final move. Congratulations!

selvaraj:

very good animation,goog timeing and good acting.

Kyle Mohr:

I like how you justified the wheezing sound at the end with the left guy pouring coffee on him.

I think the breathing could be more consistent throughout. The audio sounds like Grey is breathing pretty heavily the whole time, but that really isn't reflected in the animation.

The lip sync seems pretty soft, I'd take another pass at it and really try to get clear consonants out of it. Also, you may be able to open up the mouth a little more when they're talking, cause the pink guy sounds like he should be yelling pretty loudly.

Some funny ideas goin on, keep up the hard work! Nice added touch of the coffee mugs and pitcher animation.

boris:

Good timing, nice gestures, snappy and i like the poses.

Eric:

Great piece, posing is strong on both characters. When the tan character rises, great attention to detail on the motion of the body, and the subtle weight transfer towards the end.

Victor Wong:

More eye contact is needed between the characters. Otherwise, posing and facial expressions work very well here.

Noah Arntson:

Great overlapping.

David Humphreys:

some sound clip jiggery pokery at the start there i think, unless its just an error in the file.

good work overall and i like the stuff falling off the tray at the end of the animation, maybe you couldve done a few frames more to really catch todd reaction?

also the cup feels a little light, if its full of coffee it would probably be everywhere by the time he goes to pour it on Todd.

good work though good readable poses and some good expressions congrats!

Mark:

great subtle eye movements

Jack Daniels:

Nice work! But I thought entries which edited the sound file were supposed to be disqualified.

Jacob Patrick:

super nice - props

Brad Regier:

This one's pretty good! But it breaks the rules: no editing the audio! :)

Bilal Ahmad:

nice effort man!

vinay:

awesome. love the way todd juggles and handles the tray. nice subtle stuff

Anthony Travieso:

This is looking good. I think you can get a cleaner silhouette in frames 171 to 226 with his right arm. We lose the whole arm in the body. You could have it out to the side on the table.

Ron Price:

Really nice business you've come up with. I'm not sure the snatching the cup away and the pour are reading as well as they might. Maybe you could have the pour come after the last line and give yourself some more time to work with...

Andrew Stovesand:

The balancing act Todd has to go through was great

Matt Estes:

The pose at 48 is good. Nail down some of your timing though, "Todd" seems to be a beat or so behind his boss. Good work.

Andrew Linke:

like how the servant goes to grab the glass

Nick:

great work

vanigoel:

Little more offset in the hands of the screen left character would make it look more natural and sweeter. Nice timing and posing.

Kyle Rockman:

you have alot of accents happening so everything gets mushed together. Try picking out the 3 or 4 accents and hit those with clean poses then work within the pose to express what you need. Keep the motion controlled and not so loopy. Keep up the work.

Thomas Tadeusz Ciborowski:

When he yells at the guy (50) why is he looking at the ceilling ? His pose at (304) is overacted ... I know he is pouring the latté over his head but that seems soo overacted ..

Andre de Villiers:

Great stuff!