Rough love
October Competition Winner
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Lauren Andersson:
hahahahahah, adorable!
Mark Bogdanoff:
This one is just awesome. Wow.
Jack Daniels:
Very nice! ...but aren't these supposed to be 11 second animations? Anyway, his reaction to her doesn't really make sense, as she seems to be giving him more of a coy look, rather than one of disapproval or what have you.
Brad Regier:
And we have a winner!
Wow. You really did add silence to the audio track didn't you? :)
Amazing work!
Matt Kenley:
WOW! im impressed, totally!
Eric Huang:
Very nice! I love the concept :) and the execution is great too!
Ryan Hagen:
As far as draftsmanship and appeal this is great!!! I think it would've helped a lot if you would've added stronger anticipations in this. Especially at "Help him". It's a great peice of work though. Keep rockin'.
Jesse Baumgartner:
Nice concept and execution.
Tomas Ortiz:
Awesome!!!
Chris de Souza:
Well your animation is flawless so I'll critique your story. The beginning exposition is nice but it almost serves no purpose because we never see what happens to those characters. You should have went back to them to see whether the girl liked the drawing or not. I mean if I saw a drawing come to life I'd be pretty impressed, but maybe she's not into that sorta thing. :P
Amazing work!
Ozawa:
Fantastic! I really love your work.
Mark:
Great idea and characters.
Very original
Jeremy Schichtel:
nice idea, great expressions
kimleow:
wow! lipsync started like half of the clip...hmm..well good effort. i like it :)
Charlotte Wilcock:
awesome!!!!!
Josh Doohen:
very slick! love the toon style drawing!
Tom Law:
That was brilliant, well done
Mark Stoughton:
This is amazing animation! There is nothing to critique because in my humble eyes it is perfect!
Pete Y:
cute characters
nice set up!
Eddie Chew:
great job!
V_I_C_K_Y:
U R Trully A Winner Boss..!
Aaron Clement:
Some nice animation in here! Would have been nice to see some more interaction between the girl and the guy.... Your animation is pretty good... keep up the good work!
kEViN:
Dude that was sweet!
evan:
AWESOME!
Ann-Marie Denham:
A+! Gorgeous. I'm very envious.
Andrew Linke:
Love the 2d Animation, very fluid, The build in was slightly long but i like the idea and concept. Again very very fluid animation.
myung lee:
hahaha, awesome poses! but i couldnt tell what she was thinking when she got the drawing.
kienwei80:
Awesome!! What a great 2d animation!
Joseph Kang:
its great and everything.. but its too long!!!
Gill Frank:
brilliant. really nice timing and good flow to the animation.
realy love it!
Mathias AUBRY:
really good animation! congrats!
Jamie:
really cool stuff. Nice idea.
samy.oddjob@gmail.com:
the idea is really nice, animation is good, jsut your acting is really too much twining and cliche ... but nice work
John Erickson:
nice acting on all the characters. great drawing skills.
David Artura:
Fantastic job! Any time I see some traditional stuff, it just blows me away.
Congrats on the piece!
John:
I love it! great expressions and poses. I love the touch with the eye lashes as well:)
Seth Taylor:
That is beautiful! i especially love the little long eyelashes heart in the air sequence. Wow! One of the only ones I've watched several times.
Emmanuel:
WOW! Awesome animation! The only weakness I'd probably say about this is the time. Try getting to the point quicker.
ArunVijayan:
very nice!!!...i like ur idea...animation is also awesome......but do u think its little lenghty.....
vinay:
awesome. 2d rocks
Mat Thompson:
Great original concept, loads of extra work in there! Nice drawing and really nicely animated...great job!
Emmanuel Vergne:
Very nice animation, nice fluidity, good arcs and nice rythm on all the characters
i like the way the head moves on "i thought"
i don't really like the way the drawn character comes forward from frame 365 to 400, except that it's all good :)
Trevor Hunter:
this is fantastic! really great work
Paulo Clayton:
Love the style and the animation, but don't really get it. Really amazing animation, though.
Ciaran:
wow. all that in one month? Good work. The only thing I don't like is the sniff/wiping his nose, it's just a bit over the top. It's like he's pointing off screen and then he doesn't, he keeps talking to us. Good stuff though. Lots of stars :)
Carol:
what an outstanding animation! its awesome!! congrats
Nanda van Dijk:
the eyelash part is realy outstanding. i also realy like the consept you put in your animation
William Matthew Robertson:
Nice backstory. A little long, but nice. Very good animation too. The only thing that stood out was the stretch in the face on the word "for" in "change for me". Maybe stretch it out over a few frames, one frame was a bit harsh.









Animator: Bruno Celegão Monteiro
Description: This is kind of an homenage to all those people that at least once in life has put his talents at service to the heart. So theres this guy and this girl and theres a little fella...
Experience: some^^
Time taken: 30 days