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Final Rating: 6.23. Finished: 12 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Aaron Clement

Description: A guy is hopeful his chances of love will change if he helps out his friend.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: too long (30+ hrs)

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Daniel Huertas:

i like it.. i would have change the intensity on " this girl that he loves" because the audio clip does have ehphasys on that part.. the lipsync is good but it doesn't hit the words exaclty on time.. check the last pose (right hand) it looks a little uncomfortable... keep it up!

Brad Regier:

Good stuff! i like the acting, his internal dialog at the beginning.
The first and last pose on the SL arm could stand some tweaking. Arm kind of twisted at the end. At "get him" his face gets lots when the head rotates. The same thing almost happens at "maybe ya know *sniff*..." but i think it looks good the second time.

kimleow:

i like how he turn away and talk to himself. the hand gesture looks good except for the last pose.

Ryan Hagen:

I like this one, good acting.

Aaron Clement:

This one's mine... no comment.

Adam Knight:

I really liked your gestures. I think he could use some more work with expressing how he's feeling with his eyes, but good work all around.

Marcos:

Clear stagging, good mechanics :)

Michael Vandenhoven:

Love it! Kept simple and belivable

Eddie Chew:

very nice.....nice holds and not too many poses.....good head movements....

Ann-Marie Denham:

This is very well done, though it would have been nice to see the stutter reflected in the animation.

Steve Clarke:

Yeah i liked this.Very smooth and good gestures.

kienwei80:

Good acting. Pretty good work. The lipsync can be improved more.

Alonso Soriano:

didn't quite make me believe he's looking away to think. You're close but didn't hit it for some reason, not sure why though, maybe he needs to antic his turns away with his eyes, like he loses focus on his listener while he's searching for what he's trying to say

myung lee:

great polish! maybe he could be more energetic? i can tell hes also talking to a principal. hehe

Patrick Chin:

The feeling of sincerity and general animation looks very good Only his facial expressions could be more clear to convey what he is really feeling. Also the last pose could be stronger. Very nice overall!

david arthur:

the acting is nice, i think the mouth could be pushed a bit further though, it doesnt quite match the tone or volume of the dialogue

John Erickson:

nice animation

Ozgur Yildirim:

Good one.

Dereck:

nicelooks like you put a good amount of time. you can probably push that facial animation just a bit more. watch that elbow 1/3 to half way the elbow need to be solid on that table when he lifts his hand . just grab the vector and bring it towards the camera
on the last pose drop the characters right elbow a bit

jared embley:

Great smooth flowing animation, subtle yet powerful

Mariya Kalachova:

Wow really good.. the only constructive thing I could say is that he seems a bit more upset in the dialogue.. but no really it's very clean!

Karunakar Reddy:

i like the acting very much.. Best wishes from me

Mat Thompson:

Subtle acting choices but well placed and chosen. Well animated throughout!

Emmanuel Vergne:

Nice rythm and i like the small details you put in the head.
I think you can have stonger poses on the mouth shapes.
Careful with the (dark) background : it makes the poses not clear, especially the last one.

David Bokser:

nice polish. The hand breaks at the end.

Derek Mabson:

You can animate kid. Nuff said.

Manas Sahoo:

Expressions are not impressive