Alfred In Trouble
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Brad Regier:
Nice work!
Maybe have him approach her earlier, gradually. I wasn't sure whom to look at.
Matt Kenley:
its really very good, my only comment is on the composition. I like it, but it seems to take away from the main character. Its really a matter of opinion, but its very good regardless.
Daniel Huertas:
i like most of it.. the last part seems a little bit off from the intention.. nice job!
Joseph K. Garrahan:
Very good. But at the end, I am not sure if it's the appropriate visual emotion.
Eric Huang:
I like it! Nice facial animation :).
Aaron Clement:
I like the subtleness of your clip. A bigger reaction from the girl at the need would have been nice... The guy looks too happy at the end for me... Bottom line... definitley one of the better ones!
Josh Doohen:
nice work!
Alonso Soriano:
love the keep alive on her, she stole the show with staging first time through (I read left to right, and she's closer forground, I think pushing the lighting slightly further would be enough to make sure the attention's on him) nice performance on him, could maybe have had a little cleaner silhouette instead of most gestures mostly in front of his body
Chris Welsby:
really nice work. i love the hand poses, especially the one at the end when he his holding his finger. Your piece has got a very nice feel to it, with lots of nice acting choices
Harry G:
love the acting .... could have done a little bit more with the fingers like delays.
John Erickson:
i really like the hand poses. the finger twisting. good job
Ozgur Yildirim:
I like it!
Mariya Kalachova:
Wow great! the only thing that bothered me was the 2nd character's lack of reaction at the end. But very nice anyway.
Giovanni:
Try to refine her movements providing more varietions in emotional texture
Dan Dulberger:
I liked everything up to the last move. Don't feel it was the right move to make. Seemed kinda unsensitive. All animation is good though.
Francisco:
nice hair ! hehe
Robert Tighe:
why 2 characters?
selvaraj:
goog animation
Nanda van Dijk:
i realy like the way you put the characters and that he staps forward in the end, that works realy well. i just dont like his facial expression. its as if he hangs between two emotions.
Markus Geerts:
Wow! Great acting. You really can FEEL the sadness of the woman! I'll never wash my eyes again ...this month :)
William Matthew Robertson:
I think this could be even more funny if the wife/girlfriend/female in the front reacts to him saying the word girl. So go from worried to wide eyes, and then possibly go to anger just as he comes up behind her.









Animator: Shuki Gamliel
Description: Alfred is in trouble,
he didn't do anything with the girl but it dosen't matter becouse his wife is jealous
Experience: 4 Years
Time taken: 6 Days