Animator's don't need sleep

Final Rating: 4.67. Finished: 56 out of 131 entries.
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Animator: Alonso Soriano

Description: After I smoothed the curves on the COG and spine I didn't have time to do anything more than a strai(...)

Experience: AM class 1-4, +1year in games

Time taken: who knows

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Jamie:

cool. Body movement was nice. The facial expression could've been more in tune with the audio.

Brad Regier:

I like the poses. I especially like the facial business in the last pose. Maybe more OL at "help him." This just needs more polish and tweaking:the fun stuff!
Good job!

Marcos Borba Moreira:

"this girl that he loves" i miss a very good arc on the arms! :)

Eric Huang:

Nice facial expressions. The body is a little jittery in the middle ~120,,, it's distracting

Chris de Souza:

I like the way he moves around. But it seems like the camera could be a little farther away from him to see more of the action.

David Bokser:

the poses are very nice. There's a few parts that need some more polish and I think the last part needs to have more punch because the timing is pretty quick in the beginning with lots of exaggerated posing but then the ending is pretty flat.

John Erickson:

There are some good poses. Some that need some work. Could start off alot stronger with the 'I thought' and could end up a bit better with some arm movement with 'change for me.' good job overall

Holly Buechel:

nice facial expressions

kEViN:

Try to push the poses a bit more in the mouth. Looks pretty generic right now. I like the contrast in the poses between frame 45 and 68. Overall I think you just need a polish pass yet.

Steve Clarke:

I liked it overall but felt that some of the moves seemed a little "less worked than the others which was a shame. Not bad though.

Josh Doohen:

great animation! a little too much eyebrow movement that takes away from the face toward the end. otherwise good job!

Emmanuel:

The eye gesture seemed confusing.

Aaron Clement:

The brows were good at the end.. the hands seemed too jittery, though...

Gregory Naud:

Animation is too jaggy at the begining. Watch for the lipsync. Avoid getting too much of the character out of screen like on frame 132. Facial acting is kinda cool at the end.

David Artura:

Looks to be a pretty good effort. I would only ask that you not move the head around so much so that we can really see the lip sync. Some of it seems a bit late.

Some of your posing choices seem a bit odd to me, and some of the transitions are too abrupt.

Watch the head wobble between 100~120-ish.

John:

kind of choppy

John Cruz:

Really good I thought the poses were appropriate as well as the facial expression.

Dan Dulberger:

Nice eye/brow animation, specially at the end.

Derek Mabson:

I really like the "If I can help him..." Nicely done.

Rajesh Gupta:

More facial expressions required.