Hernán Bruna:

Uff very good style and image, but the movements are too slowy and kind of boring

John Erickson:

I love the beginning with the hand rubbing on his face. The lip synching is a bit off and in the begginnig when he yells 'I thought!' his mouth should be alot more open. His lip synchinig and eye expressions doesnt really convey the tone of the voice. Also the poses seem to be a bit late. When he says 'this girl that he loves' he should already have the picture held up. Also, he is really early on the 'change for me'. I think he should have started pointing at himself a bit later. Just at or before he starts saying 'Change for me'.

Kyle Rockman:

Overall, all the poses you have are pretty week. Even the beginning where you did some emotion stuff.....it seems as if the character just blends between the poses you choose. Take a look at a book called "timing for animation" it has alot of tips in there that about how animation is layed out in terms of timing so that the characters actions have texture to them. Keep up the hard work!!!

Daniel Huertas:

nice movements but i think it didn't macth with the audio clip..

jim Duffy:

Good production value! Props, BG, etc

Aaron Clement:

Felt too green for me. Too floaty and not enough texture to the timing... have some parts faster than others... it's like listening to music, if it's all the same tempo, we get board.

kEViN:

some ok poses but the whole thing feels very slow. Maybe work on your timing a bit more

Eric Mesa:

I love the eyes!

kienwei80:

The hand holding the phone is a bit floaty.

David Artura:

There's a lot good about this, good job.

I think you should work on your lip sync for the next competition, it's a bit soft in this clip.

Stuart Livingston:

Off-timed lipsyncing, movements were slow and unbelievable, the phone covered his mouth a bit too much too. just not very believable overall

Roshan.k:

even timing?!

Emmanuel Vergne:

everything seems to have the same rythm

Derek Mabson:

Good animation. What stuck out to me is the phone sort of wandering and not really being planted to the side of his face. Very minor though. Everything else is great.

Nanda van Dijk:

i realy like your animation i just think that your libsinq is a bit to slow... if you make it more snappie that would be better. now it eases in and out to smoothly.