Justin G:

bar fits the audio nicely

Eric Huang:

A lot of good stuff going on here :). I feel like th body is a bit stiff in the beginning.

John Erickson:

Starts off a bit slow with his head down and little movement. The middle part of the scene is good. has plenty of good poses and the timing is good. I also like the way he looks up and down at the bottle when he is saying 'ya know' After that it seems when he is done thinking and says 'change for me' he should be looking somewhere else. The part in the beginning at 'that if i can help....' his right hand has some good movement but his arm doesnt move at all. slight movement on the arm during that movement would liven it up a bit.

Aaron Clement:

The background is good... but it makes your scene feel too busy and makes it harder for us to focus on your character, which is where our focus of attention should be... I almost made this mistake... The bottle prop was a good idea, though.

Taber Dunipace:

Pretty nice acting and animation quality. Try to get the action across more simply with less little actions that distract from the main acting.

Also some of the timing is a bit awkward, such as the first arm flail, which i missed on the first viewing and some of the faster actions.

david vecchio:

I really like the way he stares at the bottle in the end, it looks very genuine.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Not bat idea, some poses are nice but the first pose (f66) seems to stiff and the middle section is a little too frantic. You've got some nice acting choices although he seems to stare a bit too long at the beer. Some lipsync parts need more work, focus on the bits that are more meaningful for the clip

Henry G. Sanchez:

BG too busy, distracting

Mariya Kalachova:

Very nice hand gesture on 'girl that he loves', I love it. And I like the talking to the bottle at the end. Maybe don't have him look down for so long at the start, it's a bit unappealing.

Seth Taylor:

That look back at the bottle is sweet

anvitha.a:

its nice animation and good idea of poses...need to improve and well polish...

Manu Järvinen:

The camera is harmfully far away - Other than that, great work :D

Ciaran:

Generally pretty good, in my opinion. I think the hand gesture on "this girl that he loves" (more specifically, frame 196) is just too broad. I like this in the moments where things are played down, so ,for me, a big arm gesture like that and the sweep of his hands at f120 feels a bit hammed up.

David Humphreys:

The glass of beer dosent seem to have any weight to it, are you using ik on the arms?

Good effort but i think you could slow down some of the movements with the hand holding the glass.

Cole Higgins:

nice, really believable and acted well.