Marcos Borba Moreira:

good body expression

Aaron Clement:

He almost seems too happy at the end. I felt too many gestures were being used... felt cliche at times... The timing felt good.

Daniel Shorten:

I like that he doesn't have to rub his nose when he sniffs, and that he ends assertively with his eyes up.

Eddie Chew:

some nice poses....seems abit jerky in some transitions....perhaps smooth out some of the curves in the head movements

Eric Huang:

Not bad :)

Steve Clarke:

Not quite sure what it is about this, I like the gestures and timing, but something doesnt quite work in places. The moves seem a little forced i think and need to be more natural. Sorry if thats vague.

Josh Doohen:

good motion. did that kid get beat up?

W Jacob Gardner:

is there a reason for the diploma on the wall? does that give any context to the scene?

Tom Cho:

The eyes seem to lack any life.

John Erickson:

some good poses and timing. the lip synch looks a bit off. good job overall

Wolfram Kampffmeyer:

Movement not smooth, did you animate on 2s? smooth your curves! Nice poses though

Stuart Livingston:

That's a great pose at "this girl that he loves" I wouldnt have thought of that but it works. Decent posing, but could've used a render, as you may agree

selvaraj:

good animation

Teju Aloysius:

good and unique acting poses. looks cool.

Henning Koczy:

REally good. Up til the last pose... turns floaty... end on a punch.

Mike Courtney:

lip sync needs some work