Guillaume Roux:

good idea

Lenka Zuckova:

I like the beginning then it get's a bit confusing. To whom is the character talking? Also, he seems like he is glued to the floor and he is not shifting weights. At the end he looks like he has an epilepsy. When he falls on the floor his left hand should rest on the floor and the body should not be that stiff, he looks as if he was excercising. The vending machine is a good idea though.

Charles Eubanks:

The performance here is good, and has some nice poses. I didn't quite get the ending, where he's beating on his neck or chest. And some of the body movement seemed physically incorrect -- for example the stomping (frm 202-215), where his leg moves independently of his body, and he didn't adjust his balance to compensate. At any rate, good job with posing the character to convey his emotional state. Keep it up!

Mike Courtney:

think about where the weight is when the leg goes up and down

jonathan topf:

I think make te poses a bit less literal

Allier Zelaya:

You might want to try to have the movement be more fluid. Right now the character seems to move kinda stiff.

Craig Perez:

funny idea..not sure what pose at 323 is trying to communicate...looks like he dose a karate chop to his own neck then passes out...on the whole nice work..keep it up!

Aaron Clement:

Haha... great effort... it was entertaining to watch. Felt a little muppety at times... like he was a puppet. Just needs more overlap, and less twinning. Great stuff.

ahmet tabak:

:D is this short.:? :)

Taber Dunipace:

Too many poses and actions. I'd eliminate half of them and make the other half more interesting. Keep studying the principals.

Blake:

320-333 doesn't make any since. You need to anticipate this action some how.

Also you you are sticking you poses for too long, get some moving holds in there.

Pete Shand:

Needs a bit of work, I'm not convinced by the poses, they need more expression and they need to connect.

Keep it up though, there's a lot of potential!

Thomas Giles:

great idea!

Spencer Jones:

Strange spring leg & wrist F212ish & F227

Jeroen Koffeman:

It doesn't look natural, but who says it needs to. You've got your own funny, working animating style. I don't think it 'll do for winning this contest, but it's unique and looks convincing in its own way.

Renn:

Why is he talking to a photo booth? Animation isn't quite lifelike enough to hold up the illusion of the character movement.