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Frank Collazo:
need more curves more more overlap
Johnny Castuciano:
good
Tamara van Zal:
You have some good poses to work with but the movements look jumpy and unfinished. There doesn't seem to be a nice flow between the poses.
The bit where the camera zoomed onto his face freaked me out. Good try, you just need some more time/practise.
Charles Eubanks:
There are some decent key poses here, and your timing is good. Try adding some arcs and overlapping motion to make the performance more fluid.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You've got some good poses, a tad to cliché maybe, but there are definate glitches on the animation. Also try and build up the energy of the poses with the clip, that might help.
Jeroen Koffeman:
The poses ar good, but he moves as if he was made out of iron. Its all to stiff.
Christopher Alarcon:
It would of worked better if you swapped the characters around and the environment had nothing to do with the audio but the animation was decent.
Lineboy
Niels Beekes:
Character moves are alright, but sometimes the arms jump in their position in stead of actually moving there
Thomas Holcombe:
way to go V
8 stars
Sunny Kharbanda:
Try to stay away from so many cliche poses for your character. Also, you can eliminate a few of your poses to give a simpler, more natural performance.
jonathan topf:
I'd work on your arcs a little
Craig Perez:
try not to twin too much Fr 99 the dreaded W pose...they really over did this in Bee Movie But over all great effort, I wished i could have seen the face more during some of the speaking...keep it up:)
Aaron Clement:
Needs easy out and easy in. You couldn't tell at lot of this was still in linear mod... Try changing to to splines... you'll get a much better result... Natural characters don't move like that... The fundamentals of animation are there for a reason... like squash and stretch... overlapping action... anticipation... there all needed.
Taber Dunipace:
Floaty timing and poses. Very "CGI." Keep studying the principals.
Spencer Jones:
The setup/idea of being at a party was quite funny I thought. The animation seemed kinda click-y and I couldn't see many nice arcs going on, was all kinda linear.
Tal Hersko:
most of the poses work good. the only pose that i didn't like is the thing pose where he showed his face. the animation needs alot of inbetweens and eases for less mechanical/linear movement.
Frank G:
Nice acting









Animator: vweller88@hotmail.com
Description: NYU Cada
Experience: 1 yr
Time taken: 2 weeks on and off