Louis Ng:

Perhaps it's because of the rig, the face doesn't seem too expressive. Perhaps at 'fat', the face can display a more extreme expression suitable for the tone of the word.

I like the claymation look though. Is it deliberate? Cool! :)

Aaron Clement:

Haha... nice ending... a little cliche with the adorable pose. Felt rigid at times... good thought process, though.

Charles Eubanks:

I hear a slap sound on frame 183 that I don't remember hearing in the original. Be careful you don't get disqualified, because editing the audio is strictly against the rules!

Jeroen Koffeman:

Interesting model. Lypsync could be more exaggerated, considering the voice. The words short and thing could be more vividly expressed. De ending is nice.

John Vassallo:

Needs work on the basic posing and timing.

David Trudel:

sorry man but for me.... disqualified!
The rules are, DON'T edit the sound file! I hear some added sounds effects here.

Jason Fugh:

5: timing and pacing need work

Sunny Kharbanda:

Work on your body turns a little more. They could be more loose and natural. Also the fall at the end is awkward. But it's a good effort.. animate on!

Dan Dulberger:

Alot of motions are quite floaty and the stops are almost all dime-stops. You need to work more on your motion curves to improve timing and smooth in/outs. Nice character.

Siva Kumar:

Good effort ! but you could have avoided adding those extra sounds.

sharad kumar:

hi..great concept!...but u need to work a lot on the animation..just before he starts the dial ,there is a jerk in the head and the eyebrows snap.Always see your animation frame by frame to avoid these jerks....lip sync is kindoff zero here..may be u need to take a character with a better mouth controls.

Cameron Huber:

It's not a bad effort dude, but the movement was pretty robotic throughout the piece, Making each blocked pose really stand out instead of blending between them.

Johnny Castuciano:

funny

Taber Dunipace:

To fast and punctuated to read well. Slow it down, take out some poses and work on the acting a bit. Film yourself. Study the principals.

Frank G:

I like this. All the gestures work for me.