Guillaume Roux:

It's cool!A little bit repetitive in the up and down, but it makes him funny. Some good idea on the red man.

Johnny Castuciano:

the antics are really funny! good job!

Charles Eubanks:

It does feel like the characters are speaking the lines, which is hard to achieve. Be careful not to let your secondary character upstage the other -- the wave around frm 110 was distracting. Also, watch out for twinning -- your main character has some rather symmetrical poses. It's a good job, and I think you have potential.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........
finish it...

Jeroen Koffeman:

Poses are too elegant, too much controlled. The caracter doesn't look very desperate when he moves so elegant.

Niels Beekes:

The second character waving distracted me a lot. The other character moved nicely though!

Sunny Kharbanda:

When the guy on the right waves, it gets distracting since both of them are acting at the same time. Also, the main character's poses are too literal. Pose him based on what he's feeling, not what he's saying!

Aaron Clement:

Too floaty...don't now why the other guy ways. What is the setting? Is this a bar?

Matthew Brophy:

i would have like to have seen this polished more and rendered out

Craig Perez:

Try to Avoid Twining your arms Fr82/197...Asymmetry is always more interesting, Also avoid W pose 108, At 302 it seems when some one offends you don't run at them but away...just a thought great work..keep it up!

sharad kumar:

u need to work hard...take ref from movies etc..and work on your timing.

David Webster:

The Alfred model is distracting around frame 100 when he waves and in general. Try having him look at the speaker. If Alfred is interested in what he is saying then I'll be more interested.

Spencer Jones:

the step at frame 170ish seemed hudge. i can see what you were tring to do with the guy waving but i think you over did it a bit got i got too distracted and missed half the guy talking. some of the other bits for both guys seemed kinda slow timing wise i could be wrong though. the rest seemed cool

Andrew Stovesand:

Some strange upper body rocking happening in the beginning

Taber Dunipace:

Bland poses and floaty CGI timing. Some good stuff going on in here but needs more careful attention and planning. Keep studying the principals.

David Humphreys:

There is something odd about the scale of your charcters here, its a little distractinig at the end of the peice.

some good stuff in the middle and i like the waving.

maybe to renforce the fact that he is being ignored you could have righty register lefty in some way because at the start it seems he might be deaf.

Amy:

Most interesting thing was when the guy in red waved to an unseen passer-by.

Agne:

why is main character less developed than that other one?

Frank G:

Walking forward while saying 'insecure' seemed abit counter intuitive. The other gestures were good.