Gill Frank:

Nice rendering but everything in the main character has no poses. He is allover the stage.
Would be nicer if you had some strong poses and hold them.

Tamara van Zal:

It looks very unfinished. The second person (tall guy) would have been better off not being in the animation. Congrats on the mouth sync. I was impressed when i saw the tongue movement.

Louis Ng:

Sergio's animation is a bit too 'messy'. I think at certain points he should be in a moving hold, not shaking his waist around all the time.

Rico Lim:

other character is distracting

Mariya Kalachova:

Be careful with the weight, his body seems to have a mind of it's own.

Johnny Castuciano:

they sort of look drunk

Brent Steinberg:

i really dont know whats going on here. is he drunk? there's some good animation here, but it's lost in a overload of poses.

Charles Eubanks:

Good collapse at the end. The second character was really distracting -- you might have been better off just taking him out of the scene.

Marcos Borba Moreira:

the character moves a lot. would be nice to have some moving holds or less poses. for me is over animated

Paulo Clayton:

Trying to figure out what's going on here... I know it's not finished, but I can't even surmise what the tall guy's doing. There's also lots of extraneous movement going on in the main character, very distracting from the audio.

Caleb Drewel:

the bubblyness of the fat character is good at first, but i think u need to pull it back a bit in the middle, and then give it more at the end. he looks like he is made of rubber at one point... but it is very solid in most other points. good stuff

Niels Beekes:

Wow, the fat character seems really drunk? If you meant to do that, it's alright off course.

David Trudel:

keep control on this guy....is he drunk?

John Vassallo:

First character is nice but a little floaty, second character is distracting, its too bad it wasnt finished

Jason Fugh:

5 stars: needs some more work. take out some of the characters movement, to much going on

Dan Dulberger:

Fat guy moves kinda wobbly and lacks some weight. Some moves are nicely executed though, such as the hand running down the face and the lipsynch. Skinny guy obviously just blocked.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Waaay too much movement, act the clip before you animate, adding poses is not animating. Choose your poses carefully and work to make the readable. I'm sure you notice your characters bends and flexes like crazy.

Aaron Clement:

Okay, I'm assuming you ran out of time to finish this one... Were they dancing in this clip?

Tomas Ortiz:

I owuld get rid of the second thin character his movements take the attention away from the one charcter we should all be looking at. He may hinder your overall score,

David Webster:

Work on staging. The character on the right looks like he is poplocking. His motion takes the attention away from the guy that is speaking.

Dave:

don't be afraid to have the character keep still once in a while. It looks like he's standing on marbles and that gets to be distracting from the acting in the scene

andrew s:

This is good, just a little too over the top, there needs to be more texture in the animation. Hold the poses a bit more, maybe. The first held pose is great.

Taber Dunipace:

Ok, there's so much stuff flashing around that I can't focus. It looks nice, but if you have one character in stepped, it just makes it too bizzare to follow.

dinesh:

hilarious, but the acting's all over the place!! fun stuff though, in a surreal way...

sharad kumar:

hey! wats up with alfred?....be careful with sergie's head and neck position.

Valere Gauthier:

not bad. too much movements though!

Andrew Linke:

too much rocking back and forth in the characer.

Timothy Doolen:

The acting is way over the top, but it fits because you make the animation so fluid. The end, where he screams and puts out his hand is great.