I was adorable once...
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Allier Zelaya:
Needs better facial expressions. Seems a little stiff. Good start.
Ian John White:
Nice effort, too much symmetry in the hands and arms half way through, lip synch look primitive in shapes, get a few more blend shape in if you can
Victor Ens:
I think the poses could and should be a lot stronger and more clear.
Aaron Clement:
You've definitely improved it since I sore this in the forums. The expression came across stronger. I think it's always going to be hard to have strong expression with this character... the parts of his face are just too far apart to really relate properly to each other... which they do in a normal expression... I think you did a good job considering the limitations.
Johnny Castuciano:
funny
Émylie:
too much hand movement,.... i like the character though:P
Mike Courtney:
his movements are a bit linear
Sunny Kharbanda:
Nice idea.. but some of your poses are too literal (like "short" and "fat"). Also, the guy only acts using his upper body, while his hips stay still. Using more weight shifts, twisting etc. will help loosen up the performance.
Dan Dulberger:
The face isn't expression emotions clear enough.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You need to push your poses more and get the performance right.
Watch out for cliché poses that don't really fit the audio clip. Work on the lipsync also.
Pam:
Like the concept, belly jiggle and the sack acting is the best part.
The character is a bit stiff in the shoulders, and he could maybe twist his spine a bit.
Taber Dunipace:
The last action is WAY too fast to read and the motions need to be loosened up. Needs better principals.
Spencer Jones:
That mouth is so funny. I felt like I shouldn't be liking this piece but the animation I thought was pretty good and very clear. Saying that F139-170ish didn't work so well for me. Maybe shouldn't have stretched him backward.









Animator: xu
Description: A conversation between a upset businessman and a funnry sack.i think its still quite rough in some parts, hope u guys like it, leave some comments will be great. thanks!
Experience: 2 year
Time taken: 10 days