Luc Degardin:

There's good things here. maybe too many things happening in the same time (2 characters, the chair)

Tim Kings-Lynne:

for me the spin is confusing and possibly too much. The face is never really visible to make the expressions readable.

the lip sync and shapes are poppy sometimes

i personally think he looks to angry rather than stressed/fustrated

thanks

Johnny Castuciano:

I really liked this one!

Brent Steinberg:

this one's mine, im throwing off the curve.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........
need eye contact between two

jinu:

a very good animation, liked the way the other guy was reacting.

Jeroen Koffeman:

Hands on table should be a bit later, exactly level with the word 'fat'. The voice really comes to life, very good.

Jor:

Wow, great animation! Love the guy sitting down on the right and his mannerisms.

I guess if I had to be picky, I would say that the inclusion of the spinning is questionable. Spinning seems more like a boredom thing, he could just be doing something more sulky instead.

Charles Eubanks:

Great job with the lip sync! You can actually lip read what he's saying. Also, good job with the big inhale around frame 97.

Jason Fugh:

11 stars: good timing and gestures

Aaron Clement:

The ending was good. I felt there was a lot of unrelated movement, though. Silhouette overall was good.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, you've got pretty nice acting choices and poses, there seems to be some jerks on the more wide movements though. You might also benefit from a closer staging to make the piece more interesting.

sharad kumar:

good work there!!..i liked sergie's last pose a lot!

David Webster:

After he says thing the movement doesn't seem natural. It also takes the stage away from the character saying "did I make you short". Great poses.

Rob:

Fantastic work.. totally out of the box actign decisions that work really well for me. I love that the listening character mimics the dialogue acting in places, really give that feeling he's gone through this before. Excellent subtext. The hitting of the chair, while fun, also is a bit confusing the first watch through.. keeping the space open so you can really see it spin might have it read a little clearer.

andrew s:

some good poses, timing is off in places but it is a very good effort.

Taber Dunipace:

A nice scene, but it lacks interest because of the poses and timing. Study the principals.

Amy:

Nice little touch of him spinning in the chair.

Dan Harriman:

The spin is a little distracting, probably not the best choice. It was good up to that point but I think if you'd held the fat guy's 226 pose it would have led perfectly into "I made you short"