candid camera

Final Rating: 5.16. Finished: 27 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: Nomercy

Description: Hi all this is my first entry to this competition ,this is my close to final shot, expect lot of suggestions and comments from all of you so that I can make some brush up work for my final post.

Experience: two years

Time taken: five working days

Comments:

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Dhar:

Appropriate character for the clip, good poses and good use of space. The end pose seemed a little weak.

Frank Collazo:

at the end frame the pose if off balance, very good like it

Tamara van Zal:

Good job. I liked the facial movements. The feet seemed like they were a bit stuck/heavy when he walked.

Jeroen Koffeman:

Very good

Caleb Drewel:

i like his little steps, but i think if he just was walking the whole time, it would be better.

Jason Fugh:

5 stars: good subtle gestures

Matthew Brophy:

i feel you are so close just need to loosen the character up a little

Harry G:

The end wasn't as good as the animation done in between.

Charles Eubanks:

Nice! Strong performance, and a lot of energy to match the dialog track. I think the lip sync is off in some spots, such as the first line ("adorable once"), but aside from that, this is very good!

Yem Xnake Yu:

you have captured the voice's rhythm,good~

Aaron Clement:

Good... just felt a little static at times... The timing felt good.

Rob:

I like the acting decisions here. The one thing that stood out as needing work is the scream at the end. The final pose feels clumsy and boxed-in. Try a different angle to open up the arm and let us see the final gesture... also, position the body a little more solidly over the ankles, right now he feels off-balance.

Johnny Castuciano:

nice and simple!

andrew s:

good work.

Taber Dunipace:

A bit behind the audio and also ends abruptly. Fairly good animation but just a bit "blah." Need something to give it life.

sharad kumar:

u cud've taken one more sec and settled him in the end!

Spencer Jones:

One of the better ones.

Ralph Pacheco:

Really liked your facial expressions, nicely done all around.

Amy:

I wish the view was closer so I could better see the detail you put into the face.

Adam Knight:

Nice work!