Marco Palmieri:

need to flow more from poses. No need for the camera move at begining.

Erik Westlund:

Color and lighting sets the mood but that's besides the point. Leaning pose in beginning would work better if it had more weight. Movement is very stiff and poses are mostly symmetrical. Camera cut in the beginning is too similar between first and second shots. Slap at the end is out of character since this guy is too afraid to say bodies out load.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

more fluidity in your animation...good start though

Caryn:

Your movements are very robotic. Add more fluidity to the change of poses.

Kay Ma'Ani:

lol I loved the wrist back at the end more than anything......though my concerns are more on the story, which is defaintly unique compared to others and should be congradulated on.....more work on lip syncing in the future would be great

Paul Naas:

It looks like you're not much past blocking, but your moves need some eases, especially on the sniper. Great scenario though.

Nate Lane:

Awesome man. I really love how you have the 2nd guy lipping the letters first. Really shows thought process. Well done. I also love how the last guy is about to smack the kid. Awesome.

Jason Smith:

Try using more arcs and overlapping action, movement seemed too mechanical. Nice staging.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: The sniper trying to figure the spelling is a nice touch.

Misses: About to smack the kid changes the mood too suddenly from light hearted to drama.

Gregory Naud:

Animation is too linear. Try some eases on the different movements.

Mayank:

nice work

Ashwani:

keep it up

Mike Courtney:

all animation appears linear

James Fearn-Wannan:

The movements are a bit stiff and linear.. I think you need a few more keyframes and offset some of the motions a bit.

Christopher Salamat:

very stiff, you need to add a lot of secondary movement and overlapping action.

Janarthanan:

Improve dude..very basic level of workk

Emmanuel:

haha i like the ending.

Santiago Montenegro:

jeje very funny but a little stiff