Watching their bodys!

Final Rating: 3.42. Finished: 55 out of 72 entries.
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Animator: Mark Persson

Description: 2 guys watching theirs bodys from above!

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 3 days

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Dian Anggraini:

Cute.

The kid totally stole attention once he entered the scene. Maybe because your character movements are very minimum, just a slight change would stole the spotlight. Maybe you could make him enter later, and instead of going up, make him going left/right.
For facial expression, I think you could make it more interesting by adding more mouth shapes. The kid is missing the last "s" of his line.

Andrew:

i would have like to see some body movement in the characters. they're all quite static

Erik Westlund:

Fun concept, although I'm not sure which bodies they are talking about; their own, or those of others. Poses are mostly very static with slight head movement and some mouth shape changes. Licking lolly-pop cycle was a good way to keep the boy's poses active and alive.

Ryan Chan:

I love the style of this animation. But i think you could a little more body animation to the two guys instead of just mostly mouth animation for the dialog.

Ken Rice:

Nice idea and drawing - not really enough animation for me though

Noah Arntson:

Very creative!

Nate Lane:

haha. I really love the personality of the skinny guy in the blue. I think he is developed very well. Keep it up!

Eric Huelin:

Kid licking sucker distracts too much from the nearly unmoving characters.

Janarthanan:

nice idea..

vivek:

good idea still there is lak a composition between character and action

Mayank:

nice concept ....kaap it up

Ashwani:

nice work its also funny

Amanda Gil:

cool!

Miguelito:

Great idea woooo. blow me out

Brad Regier:

Interesting concept. Try to break up the acting on the kid, vary it somehow.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

very stiff

Ben Hatton:

Very interesting. Would have been good to see some of the idea behind this work, its a bit surreal otherwise.

James Fearn-Wannan:

Hm.. I think it's ok.. perhaps a bit simplistic..