Watching their bodys!
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Dian Anggraini:
Cute.
The kid totally stole attention once he entered the scene. Maybe because your character movements are very minimum, just a slight change would stole the spotlight. Maybe you could make him enter later, and instead of going up, make him going left/right.
For facial expression, I think you could make it more interesting by adding more mouth shapes. The kid is missing the last "s" of his line.
Andrew:
i would have like to see some body movement in the characters. they're all quite static
Erik Westlund:
Fun concept, although I'm not sure which bodies they are talking about; their own, or those of others. Poses are mostly very static with slight head movement and some mouth shape changes. Licking lolly-pop cycle was a good way to keep the boy's poses active and alive.
Ryan Chan:
I love the style of this animation. But i think you could a little more body animation to the two guys instead of just mostly mouth animation for the dialog.
Ken Rice:
Nice idea and drawing - not really enough animation for me though
Noah Arntson:
Very creative!
Nate Lane:
haha. I really love the personality of the skinny guy in the blue. I think he is developed very well. Keep it up!
Eric Huelin:
Kid licking sucker distracts too much from the nearly unmoving characters.
Janarthanan:
nice idea..
vivek:
good idea still there is lak a composition between character and action
Mayank:
nice concept ....kaap it up
Ashwani:
nice work its also funny
Amanda Gil:
cool!
Miguelito:
Great idea woooo. blow me out
Brad Regier:
Interesting concept. Try to break up the acting on the kid, vary it somehow.
Angelo Sta. Catalina:
very stiff
Ben Hatton:
Very interesting. Would have been good to see some of the idea behind this work, its a bit surreal otherwise.
James Fearn-Wannan:
Hm.. I think it's ok.. perhaps a bit simplistic..









Animator: Mark Persson
Description: 2 guys watching theirs bodys from above!
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 3 days