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Animator: James Fearn-Wannan

Description: It's all a bit .. stiff ..

(Background photographs by Flickr user "gusdiaz", used under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial-Share Alike 2.0 license.)

Experience: 3 years as a student

Time taken: 12 hours

Comments:

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John T. Coomey:

hey this is looking really well.. Just watch the lip sync on the first guy it feels s bit off and also you could push the mouth shapes on all the characters. Also the first guys moves a lot as though he is slightly drunk or just off balance

Marco Palmieri:

Too much movement. Need to hve some cleare poses and also the little guy is a bit strange, is he a monkey or a tiny little man? i didn't see the bodies until the third time i watched it. Also the lip sync is a little stiff. Not bad though. keep it up.

Amy:

Some of the movements are really great, but I get too distracted by the poor lip-syncing.

Noah Arntson:

That monkey baby thing made me laugh. Although his lip-sync could've been polished.

dheer chaudhary:

nice concept

Ken Rice:

good effort - lip sync is out though...lips move too rapidly (some popping). Choice of rig for the kid caused me some confusion initially (thought this was meant to be a monkey)

Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:

too much drifting

Eric Huelin:

hits: Attractive backgrounds.
Misses: The red shirt guy seems to be shot with different lighting, can't make out the blurred foreground, the lip-sync is off, finger movements from the shading hand and his eyes wondering to it is distracting.

Nate Lane:

haha very funny stuff. I love the little moom

Vanessa Blair:

I think the first guy should react when the kid (or in this case, small creepy moom character) spells out the word. Good job!

Janarthanan:

lip sync does not work well..
lot of floaty actions..rendering spoils the idea..cud have reduced ur light..the boides at bg cud not be seen..

Mayank:

Heyee..nice work..

Ashwani:

great

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync on red shirt needs work, looks like there are some pops

Peter Satera:

It's not bad, but I dont feel that they are really talking. There's little body movement and not much attention to detail in what they say. Nice renders. But I would like to see more character involvement,

Andy Bewernick:

I liked it, although if felt that the words could have been more defined. Overall pretty good.

Ben Hatton:

I really like the way guy1 smiles at his.. um.. pet? just before spelling out bodys. Guy2's acting is a bit weak, maybe just exaggerate slightly?

Santiago Montenegro:

good ligthing and animation

jonas bech:

the lightning is good

Juan Carlos Valdez:

animation is floaty. there is no solid posing

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