Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

maybe the kid needs something more since you don't see his face...everything seems well animated though...

Ken Rice:

good setup but I think your characters dye a little due to the lack of movement - the left guy in particular - lower body parts are frozen to the spot.

Bill Zebleckis:

wheres the bodys?

Virgil Tanasa:

looks nice, a bit too floaty. i'd say that the mouth gesture of the left guy, when he's trying to cover his "bodies" spelling is actually useless, the way it looks now, he is not covering his mouth .

Nate Lane:

Haha, I really love the final expression of the guy in the black stripes. Really awesome... unique and clear. Keep it up!

Andrew:

i like it. maybe a little more movement from screen right guy at beginning

Noah Arntson:

Your foreground kid character overlaps the green striped character--which makes it kind of visually confusing. Great setup overall.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: The sitting character's acting are smooth and natural
Misses: Spelling guy doesn't wait for an answer? Kids movements seem over acted to compensate for facing away from camera.

Jason Smith:

Nice job on the arcing.

Vanessa Blair:

It's usually not a good idea to have a character with his back to the audience. You lose all the wonderful facial expressions! Overall good job

Mayank:

nice work..u should work on hip..

Mike Courtney:

keep pushing the animation

Andy Bewernick:

I like how you had the hand not cover the mouth. I lot of people made that mistake and it's not very good. I would have rather had the kid face the camera.

Arief Leuvenardi:

Nice animation but I'm not a fan of the last facial expressions.

Joan Delmont:

I think there is too much hand move...The intention of the characters are not clear to me, but the animation is clean.

Ben Hatton:

Guy1 has bad posture! The way he swings around while talking is a bit odd. Not sure why they're so suprised at the end.

Janarthanan:

not bad...but need to work on repeating actions..and chk weather the action suits the dialogue..coz some axns did not suit the dialouge..the kids axns r not convincing..culd have made it better..

Ashwani:

good

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like it.

Juan Carlos Valdez:

don't hide animation. and the animation is floaty

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

Love the outfits and old-timey feel. Good start on the acting, but the reaction on the brown-haired guy seems delayed. Also, the kid shaking the shovel seems choppy to me - perhaps a little too threatening.

Santiago Montenegro:

jeje very funny