Can't re-write whats perfect
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Mark Bogdanoff:
I love the background photo.
sushant:
good effort.... need to bring contrast in the gestures... as they mostly looks same.....
Brad Kinley:
IK hands? Feels ik-ish.
Lianna Scrimger:
watch out for Moom's giant fingers, it's easy to make him look way too spastic with hand gestures. :) Nice effort but it could use more polish on the hands and lip synch.
Ethan Reitz:
elbow motion in 124 - 128 odd
Eva Alcazar:
the way the mouth moves doesn't match the words. its too fast for the dialogue
sweet poster in the back ^_^
Rory:
Good, but can't see much of the mouth .. facial animation needs more refinement
Paul Robbins:
I would have tilted his head up more so you could see his mouth while he is talking. Your poses show good asymmetry, especially the first pose.
Traci Plagmann:
Nice job on this. There are a few places where part of his body freezes but overall really nice.
Nate Lane:
Wow this is amazing!!!! haha just kidding. it's mine :) Promise next time my lip sync wont look dubbed! lol
sharad kumar:
u neeed to smoothen your animation...its giving jerks at some places...watch the left elbow...thats a great photo behind.
Senthilnathan D:
good ..
BrunoDestefani:
A bit too robotic. There is a pop in the left elbow...Some nice poses though
Romain Digonnet:
Very nice animation.
The fingers could be worked on more.
Richard Clark:
there's a popping of the left elbow at one point that's distracting. Not bad.
Yahya:
i think its good, but the lip syncing wasn't right, and too fast. (it didn't seem natural)
Erik Westlund:
Poses and movement match intensity of audio. Nice, relaxed movement with fingers, hands, and arms. Mouth movement seems a little mechanical and lacks the variety found in other elements of this performance. Love the joke implied by the mounted photo with Elvis.
André Moreira Forni:
Hey man, nice aniamtion. My comments would be: work more on the finger animation and some of your poses looks too similar, like poses: 13, 100, 180, 225 and 260.
Rock on !
Thomas Grummt:
very repetative hand gestures, same in the face and head. some jerky movements
Barnabas Boehler:
Watch the elbow around 125-127--it seems to jump down suddenly.
Otherwise, you're doing pretty good.









Animator: Nate Lane
Description: My very first attempt at animating the body of a character. Learned ALOT Thanks to many of you here at the 11 second club :) worth it just for that!
Experience: 4 or 5 weeks
Time taken: 50-60 hours