Can't re-write whats perfect

Final Rating: 4.75. Finished: 48 out of 148 entries.
Previous Animation
Next Animation

Animator: Nate Lane

Description: My very first attempt at animating the body of a character. Learned ALOT Thanks to many of you here at the 11 second club :) worth it just for that!

Experience: 4 or 5 weeks

Time taken: 50-60 hours

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Mark Bogdanoff:

I love the background photo.

sushant:

good effort.... need to bring contrast in the gestures... as they mostly looks same.....

Brad Kinley:

IK hands? Feels ik-ish.

Lianna Scrimger:

watch out for Moom's giant fingers, it's easy to make him look way too spastic with hand gestures. :) Nice effort but it could use more polish on the hands and lip synch.

Ethan Reitz:

elbow motion in 124 - 128 odd

Eva Alcazar:

the way the mouth moves doesn't match the words. its too fast for the dialogue
sweet poster in the back ^_^

Rory:

Good, but can't see much of the mouth .. facial animation needs more refinement

Paul Robbins:

I would have tilted his head up more so you could see his mouth while he is talking. Your poses show good asymmetry, especially the first pose.

Traci Plagmann:

Nice job on this. There are a few places where part of his body freezes but overall really nice.

Nate Lane:

Wow this is amazing!!!! haha just kidding. it's mine :) Promise next time my lip sync wont look dubbed! lol

sharad kumar:

u neeed to smoothen your animation...its giving jerks at some places...watch the left elbow...thats a great photo behind.

Senthilnathan D:

good ..

BrunoDestefani:

A bit too robotic. There is a pop in the left elbow...Some nice poses though

Romain Digonnet:

Very nice animation.
The fingers could be worked on more.

Richard Clark:

there's a popping of the left elbow at one point that's distracting. Not bad.

Yahya:

i think its good, but the lip syncing wasn't right, and too fast. (it didn't seem natural)

Erik Westlund:

Poses and movement match intensity of audio. Nice, relaxed movement with fingers, hands, and arms. Mouth movement seems a little mechanical and lacks the variety found in other elements of this performance. Love the joke implied by the mounted photo with Elvis.

André Moreira Forni:

Hey man, nice aniamtion. My comments would be: work more on the finger animation and some of your poses looks too similar, like poses: 13, 100, 180, 225 and 260.

Rock on !

Thomas Grummt:

very repetative hand gestures, same in the face and head. some jerky movements

Barnabas Boehler:

Watch the elbow around 125-127--it seems to jump down suddenly.

Otherwise, you're doing pretty good.