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Scott Douglas:
This is a really good piece but a few things bothered me. The face has very little expression change (maybe a limitation in the rig?), the eyeblinks are way too fast, the lipsync needs some work, and the camera slide is a bit disconcerting.
Overall though, the poses and gestures are strong and appealing.
Sylvain Bernard:
Nice control of your animation, though the timming seems off on "the director....of my music"
Also the emotion doesn't convey well with the facial
Tim W:
There are some really great movements you've chosen!
Adriano Mariotto:
the timming is good, but the acting must be a little more desesperated.
awesome work, my work is too far than yours
Gabriel:
A little overAtecipated some times, but perfectedly acted
Brad Kinley:
Liked the small gestures a lot!
Justin Lashley:
The animation is pretty well done, but just seems too fast and snappy for this type of piece.
Steve C:
Really nice contrast between moving holds and quick movement. Great performance with a lot of contrast!
Lianna Scrimger:
nice hands
Brad Bradbury:
The head zipping around the end is a bit much. fast moves like that make him seem happy. he isn't happy at that point.
Brad Regier:
The breathing at the beginning is particularly convincing. Good job.
Ryan Lowe:
Best animation on this little guy I've seen by far.
Pete Shand:
great work! only thing that troubled me was that I wasn't really sold on his acting at the end, he looked a little too happy
eejun:
i like the fast striking paper gesture!
BrunoDestefani:
Nice poses, but the lipsync needs work. The pose after "my music" is strange. Also the pause after "I can't" is too forced
Florent Perrin:
Should avoid the camera movements, it would have been better to play with a fix frame in this case, I think...
Romain Digonnet:
Very nice. The lipsinching could be worked on a bit more, but nice acting.
Jon:
wow this character is tough and you did a awesome job. Love the paper adjustment. Great great timing and poses.
frantz vidal:
snappy, accurate, well done. Another winner in a different category.
Erik Westlund:
Nice weight and variety in poses. Good contrast is speed and size of movements. Finger pointing up pose (around 254) seems forced onto the performance.
Maya K:
Nice work! Feels subtle with real poses initially, then gets a little too over-animated with the dialogue emphasis at the end, maybe? Expressions are totally on point.
Richard Bannister:
It goes a bit over the top at the end.. he is almost no longer the same character.
André Moreira Forni:
Wow has some grreat acting choices.









Animator: James Wilson
Description: what you see is what you get.
this one was fun.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: 5days