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Final Rating: 5.86. Finished: 16 out of 148 entries.
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Animator: James Wilson

Description: what you see is what you get.

this one was fun.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 5days

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Scott Douglas:

This is a really good piece but a few things bothered me. The face has very little expression change (maybe a limitation in the rig?), the eyeblinks are way too fast, the lipsync needs some work, and the camera slide is a bit disconcerting.
Overall though, the poses and gestures are strong and appealing.

Sylvain Bernard:

Nice control of your animation, though the timming seems off on "the director....of my music"
Also the emotion doesn't convey well with the facial

Tim W:

There are some really great movements you've chosen!

Adriano Mariotto:

the timming is good, but the acting must be a little more desesperated.

awesome work, my work is too far than yours

Gabriel:

A little overAtecipated some times, but perfectedly acted

Brad Kinley:

Liked the small gestures a lot!

Justin Lashley:

The animation is pretty well done, but just seems too fast and snappy for this type of piece.

Steve C:

Really nice contrast between moving holds and quick movement. Great performance with a lot of contrast!

Lianna Scrimger:

nice hands

Brad Bradbury:

The head zipping around the end is a bit much. fast moves like that make him seem happy. he isn't happy at that point.

Brad Regier:

The breathing at the beginning is particularly convincing. Good job.

Ryan Lowe:

Best animation on this little guy I've seen by far.

Pete Shand:

great work! only thing that troubled me was that I wasn't really sold on his acting at the end, he looked a little too happy

eejun:

i like the fast striking paper gesture!

BrunoDestefani:

Nice poses, but the lipsync needs work. The pose after "my music" is strange. Also the pause after "I can't" is too forced

Florent Perrin:

Should avoid the camera movements, it would have been better to play with a fix frame in this case, I think...

Romain Digonnet:

Very nice. The lipsinching could be worked on a bit more, but nice acting.

Jon:

wow this character is tough and you did a awesome job. Love the paper adjustment. Great great timing and poses.

frantz vidal:

snappy, accurate, well done. Another winner in a different category.

Erik Westlund:

Nice weight and variety in poses. Good contrast is speed and size of movements. Finger pointing up pose (around 254) seems forced onto the performance.

Maya K:

Nice work! Feels subtle with real poses initially, then gets a little too over-animated with the dialogue emphasis at the end, maybe? Expressions are totally on point.

Richard Bannister:

It goes a bit over the top at the end.. he is almost no longer the same character.

André Moreira Forni:

Wow has some grreat acting choices.