Perfect as it is
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J K:
Lip syncing seems off... but the motion on the first 5 seconds is awesome.
Tony Mecca:
some nice stuff going on but the audio seems behind.
Lianna Scrimger:
The legs-crossed pose on 1-160 looks a bit awkward...though I really liked your snappy return to the 'sullen' pose from 200-230. I think with a little bit more attention to your poses (especially in the hands and legs) this could be a very strong piece!
peter wassink:
the whole clip seems out of sync, pitty because the acting is really very nice
Steve C:
When he says 'music' around frame 110, you're hitting the pose AS he says it. If you move that pose up to around 106-108, I think it'll communicate a bit better. The scene looks really good though, you've got some nice subtle acting that suits the dialogue quite well. Good stuff!
gerardo:
amazing performance, very fluid and with a lot of contrast
Nate Lane:
one thing that I immediately noticed is that the the breath he takes after "unbelievable" is a few frames late. anyways good work! Keep it up
Robert Diaz:
Body acting is nice, but the mouth is very distracting to me. The timing is off and the mouth shapes just arent there.
Adele K Thomas:
needs some work on the lipsync, this distracted from the acting
Joanne Ku:
Some moves didn't hit on the beat. Over all, the performance is nice.
Stanley:
nice acting
chrisbyk:
Your facial expressions are a bit off sometimes but they ve been really well done. Keep the good work.
sharad kumar:
greatt!..although we would love to see some cusion in the final settle pose!....that wudve been perfect finish...
Vahram Antonian:
Lip sync off, but good job otherwise
BrunoDestefani:
Very nice poses and timing, but the arms are too stiff sometimes. and the lipsync is a bit off
Avner Engel:
I like your creative treatment of the audio clip, well done!
Mariano Villegas Gonzalez:
Great !
Ryan Lowe:
Lip sync needs more focus.
Sylvain Bernard:
Good start, the depressed move, is to much over acted feels fake.
Jean-Luc Delhougne:
Some nice subtle stuff in here ;)
His legs are a bit too still at the beginning, the lipsynch is a bit off, and there are a bit too much poses at the end. But the rest is really cool ;) Keep it up !
Dave Bolton:
that holding the nose pose is really great for showing his personality! When he says rewrite whats perfect, I feel his hand gesture is a little late.
Todd Kough:
Great job.
David Alvarez:
Beautiful piece. I really like the firts part.
In my opinion the lipsync is a bit offsync sometimes. I also would add more overlap here and there.
Sorry for not be more specific a frame counter would be great.
Erik Westlund:
Nice wig. Good demonstration of weight with hands and arms. Last pose is a little over done since it happens a little late and we don't see him settle afterwards.









Animator: Federico Abib
Description: A musician disgusted by his director's decision.
Experience: 3 years
Time taken: I don't really know...