Perfect as it is

Final Rating: 5.51. Finished: 22 out of 148 entries.
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Animator: Federico Abib

Description: A musician disgusted by his director's decision.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: I don't really know...

Comments:

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J K:

Lip syncing seems off... but the motion on the first 5 seconds is awesome.

Tony Mecca:

some nice stuff going on but the audio seems behind.

Lianna Scrimger:

The legs-crossed pose on 1-160 looks a bit awkward...though I really liked your snappy return to the 'sullen' pose from 200-230. I think with a little bit more attention to your poses (especially in the hands and legs) this could be a very strong piece!

peter wassink:

the whole clip seems out of sync, pitty because the acting is really very nice

Steve C:

When he says 'music' around frame 110, you're hitting the pose AS he says it. If you move that pose up to around 106-108, I think it'll communicate a bit better. The scene looks really good though, you've got some nice subtle acting that suits the dialogue quite well. Good stuff!

gerardo:

amazing performance, very fluid and with a lot of contrast

Nate Lane:

one thing that I immediately noticed is that the the breath he takes after "unbelievable" is a few frames late. anyways good work! Keep it up

Robert Diaz:

Body acting is nice, but the mouth is very distracting to me. The timing is off and the mouth shapes just arent there.

Adele K Thomas:

needs some work on the lipsync, this distracted from the acting

Joanne Ku:

Some moves didn't hit on the beat. Over all, the performance is nice.

Stanley:

nice acting

chrisbyk:

Your facial expressions are a bit off sometimes but they ve been really well done. Keep the good work.

sharad kumar:

greatt!..although we would love to see some cusion in the final settle pose!....that wudve been perfect finish...

Vahram Antonian:

Lip sync off, but good job otherwise

BrunoDestefani:

Very nice poses and timing, but the arms are too stiff sometimes. and the lipsync is a bit off

Avner Engel:

I like your creative treatment of the audio clip, well done!

Mariano Villegas Gonzalez:

Great !

Ryan Lowe:

Lip sync needs more focus.

Sylvain Bernard:

Good start, the depressed move, is to much over acted feels fake.

Jean-Luc Delhougne:

Some nice subtle stuff in here ;)

His legs are a bit too still at the beginning, the lipsynch is a bit off, and there are a bit too much poses at the end. But the rest is really cool ;) Keep it up !

Dave Bolton:

that holding the nose pose is really great for showing his personality! When he says rewrite whats perfect, I feel his hand gesture is a little late.

Todd Kough:

Great job.

David Alvarez:

Beautiful piece. I really like the firts part.
In my opinion the lipsync is a bit offsync sometimes. I also would add more overlap here and there.
Sorry for not be more specific a frame counter would be great.

Erik Westlund:

Nice wig. Good demonstration of weight with hands and arms. Last pose is a little over done since it happens a little late and we don't see him settle afterwards.