Ashwani:

good job

Charles H:

the hands are moving to much in the beginning for me.

Pete Shand:

I think some of the hand gestures are getting a bit confusing and not communicating.

Jeff:

Hand gestures seem too much.

Lavendra Love:

very loose acting concept

Christiaan Moleman:

I think your choice of camera angles doesn't give the best view of the action. The first shot looks down making it hard to see the girl's face and all of the shots are kind of wide making detail hard to see. Also it would help the staging if you could see the 2nd character in the first shot (over the shoulder or something).

I think you hit the accent on "help" a bit late. Same with "me".

I'm not sure about the "thank you" reaction. It's almost like she's recoiling as if she's afraid even before he pulls the knife.

Andre de Villiers:

nice. Cameras need tweaking. Girl is a little overanimated and everything is happening at the same pace.. mix it up a bit! Choose some stronger poses.

Mark Persson:

Nice work!
U should zoom in a bit. Its more easier to see the charater and the lipsync.

Keep up with good work!

Kenny Roy:

While you chose lots of nice secondary "action", (brushing hair, holding arm), you rushed it a bit. Give each pose its due time!

Tiffany Davern:

Very nice! Lip sync was good, but the girl seemed just a little stiff. Like I said though, not bad! ^__^

Mike Courtney:

the girl's steps need work

Omri Navot:

loosen up their spines

kEViN:

try to simplify your ideas a bit. There's too much going on without motivation.

dard:

The staging of the first shot is a bit odd. Maybe a shot from waist up will serve you better.