Barnabas Boehler:

ONe thing that really popped out at me was her eye direction. She never seems to be looking at the person she's talking to.
When the man gestures, part of his hand covers up her face...you wanna avoid that too.

Also, I would add a cut that shows the face of the Man when he says his line.

C. Ben Snell:

Don't like the hand in front of her face around 220

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - framing could be better though (left guy's head cut off). Female's lip sync is out and her mouth is moving too much - simplify the mouth movements.

Jesse Colucci:

Nice job! One thing to watch out for is the guy's hand cover's her face when he says welcome to new york.

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good job. Needs work on the lip synch and you cant see the other characters reaction. Try changing the camera angle.

David Higgins:

Watch the staging. His hand blocked her face and his head was cut off.

Ashwani:

good job

Lavendra Love:

to much jerks; face expressions are not good; poses are ok

Christiaan Moleman:

I think you need to watch the IK hands. There's places where the arms move relative to the hands as if they're stuck to the air.

Mark Persson:

Good lipsync!

Keep up with good work!

Alex:

very nice! great work. cool acting. maybe his hand can be a bit lower when he moves it to his face. (looks a bit weird)

Tiffany Davern:

Lip sync was beautiful! One of hte best I've seen!

The only thing off that I saw was the arms on the man. They're perhaps a little too exaggerated when they come out, but that's very minor.

Awesome job!

Andre de Villiers:

Look at your animation in silhouette.. when he says welcome. Also adjust her eyeline. The guy is floaty.

Mike Courtney:

pop on hand of red shirt near end

Brad Regier:

Some pretty nice acting on her, but maybe gestures too symmetrical. Awkward when he covers her eyes with his hand. Weird to cut off her feet at bottom of screen like that...
Good going!

Tim Lobes:

Weird camera angle

Kenny Roy:

Work on choosing poses that blend more naturally into eachother; going from clasped hands to shrugging and back again just feels forced...

Ben Harper:

good effort but you need to get more definition into the mouth i think.