thomas reardon:

She should be walking into the scene because it looks strange when she suddenly moves behind him. I like how she sits down on the stool. Keep working on this, lookin good.

Andy Hass:

I like how he gets wistful at the thought of New York rudeness. Camera move is kind of strange.

Mariah:

Genuine expressions! Feels natural. :)

Lavendra Love:

good job in acting finished with poor lighting scene is burning with light

Mark Persson:

Good work and movement.. needs more work though.... specially the woman. needs more lipsync!

Keep up with good work!

Christiaan Moleman:

I think you wave the girl's body and head around too much until frame 80 but after that I really like your acting choices, maneuvering onto the barstool etc. You need to keep the girl alive though, when the guy is talking. Maybe glance sideways at him before doing the reaction.

I'm not quite buying the weight on the guy when he shifts into his hand-on-head pose. I think you need to overshoot it down and bring it back up a bit to show the arm taking the weight.

Olivier Ladeuix:

good idea

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

Hey...
She stop?
She Freeze?
She die?
Becouse she stay at that pose soo long time, when appear it!

Andre de Villiers:

Use the graph editor, it is your friend! (smooth out those curves) Needs some kind of gesture on "..help" Try keeping your characters moving ever so slightly when they're 'not moving' (moving holds)

Mike Courtney:

characters are static at times

Kenny Roy:

I normally say seated characters are a crutch, but then BOOM she popped up! Lol.

natalie:

She sure matches the voice. Or is it the other way round?

Ashwani:

nice

Paul Blais:

not bad... some timing issues for the guy at the end