Lis Mitchell:

I liked the bit with the dumpster diver attempting to find food or liquid, and I thought the general facial animations of the girl. I did feel her running was a bit over-exaggerated and could be stylistically tightened.

sanmat shukla:

nice work but in women charecter is not shows , she was sad ..

Fernando Porcel:

Nice approach and cool animation. My only observation is that the secondary character take the first role when he try to drink from the can, that distracts a bit the dialog intention. Perhaps the run of the girl is a bit forced.
Like a lot the final part, really cool. Again really good work. Cheers!

Barnabas Boehler:

Not too bad...although I think there is too much S&S on the guy who' s looking through the trash....especially when he says "Yeah, well...."

Typically S&S looks better if it's felt, but not seen.

Mark Persson:

Great idea and a great work...

Keep up with the good work!

Charles H:

I really like the cartoony animation on trash soda can man, but its sort of out of place with the other rig who is less squash and stretch. I say make her cartooney too

Steve Schultz:

Very good job. One thing I noticed from frame 178-194, the stretch on his head is a little too exaggerated. All in all its very good.

Phil:

I love it but maybe reduce the squash & stretch on Moom's head.

Jeff:

runnings funny

Pete Shand:

nice concept, some of it was a little off sync tho

Mariah:

Liiiiiiiitle too much squash goin' on here...

deepak:

lady hops too much. hands looks stiff when she runs. could've added overlap action to hands in that case. the bald character is far more better done than the girl. he bangs his head bit more i guess.nice work with the bald character.

Alex:

really interesting roger rabbit-like contrast between cartoony and realistic characters :) even screen space is divided that way! :)
the girls run is a bit floaty.. great job on all the cartoony stuff though :)

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

I never nothing so perfect!
Conglaturations

Tiffany Davern:

Cute expressions!! I love it! Her run looked a little weird, and it looks like she's talking to the camera instead of the character. But, other than that it was very well done. Catching the can...nice touch!

Mike Courtney:

great work on the guy, the girl's skip has weight issues and never turns her head to look at the guy

Tim Lobes:

Eyes seemed a bit off

kEViN:

maybe a little too exaggerated.

Omri Navot:

really good job. Only thing is it looks like he's tossing the can behind himself, not to the side. Work out that perspective and it'll sharpen up the piece

natalie:

I liked him.

Andrew:

has potential to be a lot better. run is too floaty. also dude's stretchy face when he says " yeah well" looks odd but i can see it being really good with more work

dard:

Watch with the squash and stretch of the guy. Your character is getting a bit off model on most of the scene.

Ashwani:

nice

Kenny Roy:

Good work, but way too broad with some of these gestures. They are well timed, but the size is monotonous.