Welcome to New York

Final Rating: 4.77. Finished: 16 out of 79 entries.
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Animator: Todd

Description: A lost girl is searching for her way in a world she doesn't understand.

Experience: 6 years

Time taken: 40 hours

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Ashwani:

very nice keeep working..

zhang fan:

Decent~!

Brian Bredehoeft:

Good animation But needs more anticipation and your timing is a little off. Other than that it is great.

Lavendra Love:

too many jerks in work smoking action is not proper

Ken Rice:

Good animation - would have been nice to have gone in for 1 or 2 mid shots though.

deepak:

cool staging and lightning, very interesting acting choice. the girl in " im afraid and ...." is the only pose i felt not good compeared to other works.

Christiaan Moleman:

The point on "very far and long" is a bit literal. Maybe a vaguer indication in that direction (more lowered, open hand) could work...

The "I'm afraid" pose is maybe a bit over the top, but I like how it unfolds on "me".

Andre de Villiers:

Good!

Alejandro Rodriguez:

Good Posing Good story telling. Great Mood.
One Thing you can improve on is the arm animation. They are very twinned and a bit robotic. Also Make them drift a bit once you hit a pose.

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

guys lip sync was pretty off..other the nthat. good work

Chris Burel:

Interesting choice, to do it on 2's. Bet it saved you a lot of time :-)

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Brad Regier:

i like the guy's acting

Kenny Roy:

You don't let anything get out of control, which is an asset as an animator; however sometimes the best way to push new boundaries is to fly off the handle and see the results.

natalie:

I do appreciate the effort, I got to see these two characters in several videos - a lot of work for sure but I personally dont find them charming in any way. They sure are trying different situations, different contexts but it s them I d change first. This girl.. she lacks salt and pepper.

asif:

hey nice work keep it up.

Andrew:

looks sorta like claymation. maybe that's what you were going for. don't think it really works though