Ashwani:

good

Andy Hass:

The simple reaction on the guy is actually working pretty well, just needs a little more attention (overlap on the arm, more life in the face). Her lip-sync doesn't seem to match most of the time.

Mark Persson:

Good idea and work!

Keep up with the good work!

Santiago Arellano:

The animation needs more polish, especially the mouth and the arm movements. But it's a good effort,

I think its hard to listen to this scene and not think about the movie, if you've seen it. I guess in therms of the story of your shot, it's pretty much the same. But I guess that's ok, maybe someone creates the same scene but better! :D

Raasi N:

Ending could have been done in a different manner.The lip sync for the girl look a little off in the beginning.The guys acting works better than the girl.

Andre de Villiers:

good effort..

Kenny Roy:

That's a lot of lip sync. Concentrate on some higher energy body performance before getting so caught up in the lips!

Curtis:

Need to pay attention to some of the fundamentals. Motion arcs, atics, action reaction. I like that you didn't give an arbitrary BIG SMILE on thank you. Hip movement is little to nothing. Everything starts at the hips. Nice Try! keep up the practice!

Mike Courtney:

rigid

Sunny Kharbanda:

Work on really pushing your lines of action, and using the spine more.