Jeffrey Lee:

Your animation is very fluid. Great job on that. =] I think you just need to work on your poses. Think about who your character is and what she would do if she was a real actor. Cheers and good luck.

chakravarma:

nice animation

doc:

nice smile and eye blink at the end.

Raasi N:

Nice animation.The point where girl says " ...nobody's been very nice to me"..and wraps her both arms around her could have been done in a different way though.

Ken Rice:

Good effort here - female's right leg is dead though (glued to the pavement).
Lip sync needs work too.

Andre de Villiers:

Good stuff! Nice subtle finger movements - i like. Her gestures seem a little repetative though. The lipsync needs a little polishing.

Jon Mummery:

Really good! I would have like to see her slump down into that pose at the start to give her more expressive movement but otherwise great stuff..

Olivier Ladeuix:

good effort, the girl doesn't need to be so animated though

Derek:

too many poses--need to simplify

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

the guy was really still when he was listening to the girl.. you could move it alittle..

deepak:

the hands movement in the beginning are not clear enough. lipsing looks bit off. but the acting seems nice.

Curtis:

Even when characters are sitting we see a lot of movement. Counter movement to be exact. Our hips will adjust to counter balance the rest of the body.

Good acting choice. Just needs a few mechanics to sell the piece!

Keep it up!

Mike Courtney:

nice work, keep pushing it

Brad Regier:

Good going.
She doesnt seem to know what to do with her hands... Maybe try simplifying her gestures.

Tim Lobes:

Not bad!

Kenny Roy:

A little puppet-ish with her being seated. It's a large crutch to have a seated character. I always recommend getting full-body practice!

Omri Navot:

nice work. those are difficult rigs but it looks like you got some life into them.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Good effort... work on your hands and try to get more asymmetrical gestures in the future! You've got a decent start on body language and acting, and better hand gestures will enhance it more.

asif:

Lipsync seems to be slower than the actual voice speed.

Ashwani:

very good

Stephen:

For the most part the movements of the characters are good. And I like the fact that this seems like a snippet of some larger story. In some of the girls arm movements she appears like a marionette. There's a little bounce to them that make it appear like she's being controlled by strings (around frame 50 to 60). I also think that she should take a little extra time wipe her "tear" away. But again, overall this looks nice.