David Alvarez:

Hey I really like the girl acting in the beggining, lost some in the latter.

zhang fan:

haha``so good~!

Steve Schultz:

cool robot!

SamoRa G:

the robot looks a bit agressive at the end but its gd stil

Mariah:

NICE! Good concept, good acting (I really felt like her emotion was right) and nice presentation!!! :D

Andre de Villiers:

Nice! Sweet robot mobster!
His arms are sticking to space, be carefull of sticky ik arms when you don't need them. The girl seems very floaty. Clean up the poses with some moving holds and snappier transitions.

Raasi N:

Oh very cool ! Very nice acting of girl and the robot.Your entry is on my favorite list too.

Alex:

cool idea! the robot's fist clench to me is somewhat confusing feels like he's happy that he was able to turn around, rather than surprised at her voice.. also needs some more work to get rid of floatiness throughout, i think..

Parker Simmons:

I'm uncertain of what the Robot's reaction is conveying in the very beginning. The animation is pretty good though.

I think you might want to reconsider the staging though. You kinda lose track of the robot with his back turned to the camera.

Nice work!

João Victor Almeida de Aguiar:

Very cool animation!

Angelo Sta. Catalina:

you can try looking for more overlaps.. makes it look more lively.. good work

Kenny Roy:

Decent, but lots of floating problems. Also work on your "focus" more. There's much to be learned about controlling the eye of the viewer, dive into it!

Stephen Dahler:

Pretty good here. the girls movement is very nice, the last movement starting around 220 is a little stiff, other than that not bad. the only thing that bothers me thou is the robot is to distracting, i kept looking at him instead of her, perhaps a different choice of camera angles would help a bit. good work thou!!!

Pete Shand:

i think the robot is lacking a bit of weight

Mike Courtney:

girl's reaction to robot's turn around is late

Tim Lobes:

Watch the composition for awkward shadows

Ben Harper:

Im not fond of the robot in this piece, i think its movement contrast the girls acting too much.

Ashwani:

vrey good

Vedanth Rajan:

nice concept! I liked the animation only thing i have to say is that theres some penetration issues with the robots hat, when he does his take and recovers the hat penetrates into his head from frame 45 to 58... due to the colour difference it feels odd at that time, we can also see the hat penetrating between frame 136-171