Welcome to NY
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chakravarma:
every thing is good but staging is not at all entertained..
Barnabas Boehler:
Nice JOB!
I like how she pauses as she takes a breath before she says "Thank You"
Wes Storhoff:
The blue guy is awesome
Andy Hass:
The cut to the guy is brilliant... you lose me when he says his line, I think it's over the top. I'd tone that down about 50%. I don't know if it's a good idea to have her looking down like that for so long at the beginning.
Matt Boehm:
Love the blue guy. He reads really well...can feel his exasperation.
Jordan Lukrich:
where is the girl. tell the story without the audio.
Jesse Colucci:
I really like the guy's sigh. It would be cool if the camera went back to her talking before he said his line. His welcome to new york is also really cool. It would be nice to see her face while she is saying I was looking for some help. Nice job!!!
Shon Stewart:
Love the guys Reaction! so good!
SamoRa G:
i like the blue guys expression b4 he talks lol
Cameron Huber:
It's a shame you pulled away from her early in her speech, as I think it would have worked just as effectively towards the end... and we'd get to see her nervousness and anxiety. The timing is pretty good on the guy though. I think some of the poses need to be pushed a little more, mostly on the girl - she feels very straight up and down at the moment, almost like her weight is perfectly distributed either side. Watch out for lip shapes not being in sync with the sound. A pretty good effort man, polish her up!
Bill Zebleckis:
i like the breathing effect on the guy
Andrew:
buddy's sigh is great
Lavendra Love:
both character are not in once scene they are not matching
Simon Bean:
The choice of shot with the girl looking down doesn't do your animation any favours - (which looks very nice shame we can't see it properly) the second half really improves. Although the blue guy sigh and eye roll looks very nice, I would really question your timing of the cut. We miss the most emotive parts of the line
Alex:
very nice. esp the guy's sigh. maybe her face can be a bit more turned toward the camera on opening line.. Great work!
Olivier Ladeuix:
try to avoid the twinned poses, having the character at a 3/4 angle rather than straight to the camera would help (for the woman)
Nice facial expressions
Fernando Porcel:
Like the balance of the rolls on this animation and the pause before the "thankyou" phrase. Nice facial expression for the man. Nice work!
Santiago Montenegro:
jeje awesome rig... I think it have twinting.. and need a bit more of overlap
Chris Burel:
I love your choice to get the reaction of the 2nd guy, who just doesn't want to hear this whiny girl.
Andre de Villiers:
Lipsync has a sortof 'cutout' feel, try smooth is out a bit. Nice Sigh! Maybe camera should stay on her a little longer..
Arcs arcs arcs!
Mike Courtney:
great work on male, bring the female up to that level
Tim Lobes:
Female rig is kind of meh, but good animation on the male
Omri Navot:
the animation on the male character is much stronger than the female one
Mark Persson:
Good work! but it sad she is looking down in the beginning. missing a lot of work for the face expression. U could changed the Video angle.
Averall... both characters feels alive and have good expressions but im missing her in the anim.
Keep up with good work!
Ashwani:
nice man
Zee Myers:
Really liked the 2nd guy...the girl's animation isn't as good, a bit stiff and her lip sync is a bit off...









Animator: Nadan Pines
Description: This is my first animation experience in Maya so I tried to keep it simple.
Experience: 3rd year animation student
Time taken: 30 hours